Editing Update #2

After editing my music video in a basic manner such as putting every video into the correct timings, cutting them down, etc. I showed my family, friends and some teachers my music video as it was to tell them what my next aims are when it comes to editing after getting their feedback, some of the feedback that I received were that they did not understand my narrative enough, therefore I have decided to film again today to try to improve this before moving on to the next step of throwing all of my editorial skills into the video. What I decided to do was film one of the beginning shots again by showing one of the brother's drinking alcohol to show that they have a slight addiction to alcohol and they use it as a coping mechanism to get over the break up that he is going through which was caused by his brother. Another idea that I did was film some work around text messages, this is because I wanted to find a way to tell the audience what the story is to make it easier to understand without changing the whole idea as we are getting closer to the deadline, therefore I used the two brother's phones and the mother's phone to text each other and film it to over layer this on my narrative. I am hoping that these ideas will improve my music video's narrative so that anyone can understand my narrative without thinking too much.